I am in Pain. - Adinah Edwards

This quote wurde hinzugefügt von adin
My heart is fading away and my smiles are a thing of the past. My insides are crumbling and my eyes are swollen from poisonous tears. I am bruised to the bone, that are all broken and I look like death itself. I am in pain. From your paining remarks and your cruel statements. From your looks of disappointment. From the marks of your hard hand that is as worn as the energy in my soul. I am simply... in pain.

Üben Sie dieses Zitat


Bewerten Sie dieses Zitat:
2.6 out of 5 based on 67 ratings.

Text bearbeiten

Autor und Titel bearbeiten

(Changes are manually reviewed)

oder hinterlassen Sie einfach einen Kommentar:


dvorakdan 8 Jahre, 7 Monate vor
I am bruised to the bone, that are all broken

Yeah, that's not good writing there. The three sentence fragments that start with From wouldn't cut it in English class either. The ideas are good, but a word like paining makes them less vibrant. I also am not sure what is "worn" in the last sentence, is it the hard hand? Also, I don't think "as worn as the energy in my soul" is really a good simile at the end there, but that's more of a personal opinion. Good writing mostly, a few touch ups away from very good, I think.
teilo 10 Jahre, 10 Monate vor
This is a typing test. Not a diary.

Testen Sie Ihre Fähigkeiten, machen Sie den Schreibtest.

Score (WPM) Verteilung für dieses Zitat. Mehr.

Beste Ergebnisse für dieses typing test

Name WPM Genauigkeit
eventlogging 170.00 100%
user871724 157.74 95.8%
typin_ 151.80 93.2%
samuraininja 132.93 97.9%
gordonlew 128.90 97.4%
brainfreezy 127.75 97.4%
user263163 125.09 93.6%
lytewerk 124.21 96.5%
johnnrwayne 123.52 97.9%
mvan6543 122.82 94.7%

Kürzlich für

Name WPM Genauigkeit
wen 42.52 97.4%
ldybeast05 82.57 94.5%
keyboarder902 64.39 98.3%
gordonlew 128.90 97.4%
quenbreak 27.40 92.6%
trishadgk 98.06 91.7%
user843630 87.13 96.7%
user228469 51.61 86.9%