Gertrude Coppard had watched him, fascinated. He was so full of color and animation, his voice ran so easily into comic grotesque, he was so ready and so pleasant with everybody. Her own father had a rich fund of humor, but it was satiric. This man's was different: soft, non-intellectual, warm, a kind of gambolling.
Gertrude Coppard had watched him, fascinated. He was so full of color and animation; his voice ran so easily into comic grotesque, and he was so ready and so pleasant with everybody. Gertrude's own father had a rich fund of humor, but it was satiric. This man's was different: soft, non-intellectual, warm, a kind of gambling.
COMMENT: 1-could not find "gambolling" in dictionary; inference supplied the word gambling, perhaps 2-second sentence had three "run-on" sentences--punctuation incorrect